I was using a camera I’d never used before, a lens I’d never used before (technically), and a film I’d only used once. Possibly not the best combination ever. I really took care in focusing this, so I think the problem comes from the eyecup/diopter adjustment. I had no idea just what it is for (still don’t, really) but I just slid it until things looked sharpest, and this sadly, is the result. I still like it, it’s just that I think it would have been so much better if the paper were in focus. So what did I learn? Maybe I should understand what something does before I start playing around with it too much. I’ll know for next time, I guess.